3 responses to “Jan-Ken-Pon – New Avengers#52 review”

  1. Steven R. Stahl

    Mr. Tomio, I see far more weaknesses in Bendis’s storytelling than you do, but the difference isn’t due merely to preferences for one style over another, or a focus on one character over another. H is storytelling fails in basic ways.

    In the current storyline, for example, none of the magic (not Bendis’s “magics“) users, not even his version of Dr. Strange, is a sorcerer. They’re either self-powered or without an identifiable source, and serve in the story as special effects generators. As nice as Bachalo’s artwork is, if it doesn’t support plot content, it’s a waste of page space.

    You noted the lack of plot progression in this issue, but that’s a routine occurrence. Look back at Bendis’s NEW AVENGERS, MIGHTY AVENGERS, and SECRET INVASION issues. You’ll repeatedly see unnecessary splash pages, extended conversations that consist of idle chatter and jokes, action without consequences (e.g., the New Avengers vs. the Hand‘s ninjas), or “fight” sequences that consist of mere fisticuffs that combine chatter with inconsequential action (e.g., heroes vs. dinosaurs in SECRET INVASION issues; New Avengers vs. the Hood‘s flunkies in NEW AVENGERS). Any given issue of Bendis’s “Avengers” series will have a high percentage of filler.

    The worst problem with Bendis’s “Avengers” work, from “Avengers Disassembled” to date, is the lack of actual stories. “Avengers Disassembled,” HOUSE OF M, and SECRET INVASION were crippled by flawed premises, but even if a reader tries focusing on characters instead, he won’t find any significant character development, no movement forward. Wanda, Scott Lang, Vision I, the Wasp — they were killed or rendered practically unusable, and Dr. Strange is in the process of being made unusable. Name one character in Bendis’s “Avengers”-related work who has advanced and grown as a character. Not Clint Barton; he’s been severely mischaracterized. Not Luke Cage or Jessica Jones; they’re standing still. Not Jessica Drew. Not even the Hood, since making him Dormammu’s puppet threatens to break the character concept.

    Then contrast Bendis’s material with Englehart’s AVENGERS and WEST COAST AVENGERS storylines. Each storyline in those two series was driven by emphasis on characters and development, whether one looks at Kang, Wanda, the Vision, Mantis, Patsy Walker, the Two-Gun Kid, Moondragon, Henry Pym, or at others. Those storylines collectively define the phrase “character-driven storytelling,” while Bendis’s pieces collectively defines the phrase “failed storytelling.”

    SRS

  2. PC812

    I agree with all of SRS’ points with just one additional point and that’s the use of Daimon Hellstrom.

    I’m a massive fan of the character, and I absolutely loved the Hellstorm: Prince of Lies series from the 90s, it was one of the best things Marvel has ever published. Daimon’s one of my favorite characters and I’d love nothing more than to see him active in the MU once again.

    However, I want DAIMON HELLSTROM active, not this bastardized version Bendis uses. The only connection this Daimon has to the real one is the name and appearance. After spending years convincing Patsy to stay away from him, Daimon is now a borderline stalker? And his speech patterns are completely ridiculous, he’s talking like a strung-out metalhead, not the regal, cunning Hellstrom I’ve come to love over the years. And then he goes from yelling at her to begging her to come home? Since when is Daimon a manic-depressive?

    If my choices are to have Hellstorm never appear in another comic again or to have this insulting depiction, I’d prefer to never hear from the character again.

    Using magic in an effective way is one thing. Steve Gerber and J.M. DeMatteis did it to great effect with their individual DEFENDERS work. But this isn’t magic being used effectively. This is Bendis abusing and punking out the characters in order to make his new pet villain appear more threatening than he actually is.

    And that is not good writing. That’s lazy writing.

  3. Roel Morillo

    Jay Tomio, I couldn’t agree more with your review of issue #52. Especially your summarization of Bendis’s writing style towards the New Avengers. For myself, I’m a huge fan of his NW work. The words MARVEL GOODNESS comes to mind when reading these stories. If there’s one thing I can fault him on is the lack of tales where one or two issues are solely dedicated to a certain character or two. You know, superhero downtime like when Logan and Nightcrawler grab a few beers. But I guess it’s a small gripe considering your dealing with multiple characters on what is after all a team book. I agree that Bendis’s writing does make shit official. This coming from a 37yr old who used to think X-men ruled the land and everything else was secondary. Now I’m excited over a few panels with Daimon Hellstorm??! Nuff said!!

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